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Oct. 10th, 2014 08:26 amMom asked me to clean all the walnuts out of our frontyard yesterday, and there were enough to fill the wheelbarrow. Shortly before she came home, Dad and I decided to see how far we can throw them from the driveway to the ivy patch, and I also threw a few upwards to kick like soccerballs (something I've done several times since the other day just for fun).
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After having discussed it with several people on Fanfiction.net, darkspecter141 suggested that I create a forum thread somewhere where they and I can all discuss Screams of Silence together, instead of me crisscrossing everyone's ideas to one another. Here's the thread, now that I've gotten all the current information up:
http://forums.luckystarshrine.com/showthread.php?t=4924
(Kial is Martin, whom I had contacted to help me with getting both parts up. The whole thing was too long for a single post, and the site doesn't allow more than one consecutive post on a thread by a single user.)
While redlerred7 and I did come up with some interesting ways for the antagonists to toy with everyone, Red did say (and Chelle agrees) that if their main goal is to profit from something illegal, then they should keep their victims to a minimum. Let me mention that the harm they inflict upon everyone is exactly the whole reason I want closure on that fic, and if they were to be smart about things, then they wouldn't even start with Miyuki, let alone everyone else, since there is no real reason for them to assume that she actually knows anything about the inner workings of her father's company. They would more likely just not bring it up with her in the first place, especially since Miyuki tells Yui during chapter 8 that they took to their own methods after failing with her. I did tell Chelle about the possibility of revenge for an affair having to do with it, which she suggested could call for a wider range, but even then what they plan to do in the company should be more than enough to wreak havoc on her father's company and life, without any unnecessary complications.
For that reason alone, there is a good chance that I'll just scrap the whole thing, and instead write a one-shot about what would have really happened at the beginning of the fic if everyone acted as smart as they canonically are.
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After having discussed it with several people on Fanfiction.net, darkspecter141 suggested that I create a forum thread somewhere where they and I can all discuss Screams of Silence together, instead of me crisscrossing everyone's ideas to one another. Here's the thread, now that I've gotten all the current information up:
http://forums.luckystarshrine.com/showthread.php?t=4924
(Kial is Martin, whom I had contacted to help me with getting both parts up. The whole thing was too long for a single post, and the site doesn't allow more than one consecutive post on a thread by a single user.)
While redlerred7 and I did come up with some interesting ways for the antagonists to toy with everyone, Red did say (and Chelle agrees) that if their main goal is to profit from something illegal, then they should keep their victims to a minimum. Let me mention that the harm they inflict upon everyone is exactly the whole reason I want closure on that fic, and if they were to be smart about things, then they wouldn't even start with Miyuki, let alone everyone else, since there is no real reason for them to assume that she actually knows anything about the inner workings of her father's company. They would more likely just not bring it up with her in the first place, especially since Miyuki tells Yui during chapter 8 that they took to their own methods after failing with her. I did tell Chelle about the possibility of revenge for an affair having to do with it, which she suggested could call for a wider range, but even then what they plan to do in the company should be more than enough to wreak havoc on her father's company and life, without any unnecessary complications.
For that reason alone, there is a good chance that I'll just scrap the whole thing, and instead write a one-shot about what would have really happened at the beginning of the fic if everyone acted as smart as they canonically are.