Need to double-check better.
Nov. 13th, 2018 05:30 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
dmxratedWent onto FanFiction to remove a line in Starbound that hinged on something I had edited out beforehand, and found out that the scene breaks were missing. Glad I hadn't shown Mom the chapter yet.
(Originally, I was going to have Miyuki space out and accidentally wind up gawking at Mondo's butt due to a high state of arousal she'd have supposedly been in after he and Rokuna had shown themselves off in some swimwear, and then get caught when the others turn around to ask her what Rokuna instead decided to ask her later in private. Both Brian and Chelle agreed that, even accounting for her habit of spacing out in general without thinking of any repercussions and arranging things to put her in a conducive physical position for it, this would still be out of character for her, and that girls in general are not so turned on by specific body parts as guys are.)
(Originally, I was going to have Miyuki space out and accidentally wind up gawking at Mondo's butt due to a high state of arousal she'd have supposedly been in after he and Rokuna had shown themselves off in some swimwear, and then get caught when the others turn around to ask her what Rokuna instead decided to ask her later in private. Both Brian and Chelle agreed that, even accounting for her habit of spacing out in general without thinking of any repercussions and arranging things to put her in a conducive physical position for it, this would still be out of character for her, and that girls in general are not so turned on by specific body parts as guys are.)