dmxrated: (Mai)
To start off, there was a two-year period when I was obsessed with Sonic the Hedgehog, while still also thinking about the events of what would have been Monster Collection Chronicles. There was a period after that, during which I'd be obsessed with Makeruna! Makendou. Not only did I still continue thinking about MCC, but this would also be the time during which I'd first conceive Parasitic Trio and form attachments to certain characters from the Pokemon franchise.

This is the period during which I obsess pretty much exclusively over Lucky Star. I've lost almost all interest in what is now Cult, not least of all thanks to how (seemingly) irredeemably broken most of MCC's plot turned out to be upon discussion with Chelle, although I'm still awaiting a new outline from either her or Jake.

My former obsession with Parasitic Trio, however, had mainly to do with everything I deemed wrong with Pokemon's main line of games, and while I would still like to see that through, it's not something I think so much about anymore that I have to continually update my outline for it. That whole thing about the fic's main characters being rendered naked by Sinnoh's lake trio is little more than a sideshow, really. I used to look forward to seeing how the Pal Park and the Battle Frontier arcs in particular would play out, but in the end, while they would be still interesting to write out, all those really boil down to is having stuff kill each other. That's exactly what inspired me to conceive the Digimon fic after I had discovered Digidex, which is also my reason for having once bought Digimon World 3 (which, of course, was somewhat disappointing for me). I was also similarly intrigued recently by YouTube footage of Yu-Gi-Oh! Forbidden Memories, but really, the concept in general is an entire genre that goes on with things like Monster Rancher, the Danish series Chaotic, and of course, the ur example, Shin Megami Tensei.

But anyway, just how obsessed am I with Lucky Star? Well, to start off, there's my tendency to cite events from the anime or the manga. I never even did that with Mon Colle Knights, but I'll get to that in a bit.

As far as my planned fanfics go, Starbound trumps both the sumo fic and Screams of Silence (that's what I'm gonna call my version of Cries Unheard, to avoid confusion with Blood's version) as my favorite fic to think about, particularly due to the various OCs I've got planned out who, naturally, will not appear in either of the others. (Not to mention the idea of having an ethnically diverse expanded cast as the premise will call for, which is all the more fun considering how few characters in canon were of non-Japanese origin.)

Within Starbound itself, though, my current favorite scene is that in which Rokuna and Mondo show off their swimsuits to most of the canon cast. Not only because of how little they're wearing, or for how thoroughly embarrassed Mondo is, in front of a mostly female audience*, or because this is one of the few chapters that will involve anyone canon other than the main four before the journey truly begins, but because of my continuing obsession with those two characters themselves.

(*Yes, whenever someone does get embarrassed, I'd prefer that it be in front of others of the opposite sex. Even though I generally prefer when girls get embarrassed about something, it is also something a turn-on for me when it's a guy below college age suffering it in front of a girl (provided it isn't outright male-bashing or "acceptable" abuse like Love Hina), though even *that* depends on the character himself. This was a better time than any to invoke embarrassment from a teenage boy (instead of one of the girls, regardless of age) in front of a multitude of girls without him being a full-fledged butt-monkey.)

Yeah, Rokuna and Mondo themselves... First of all, I'm glad I did replace Yamazaki back with Mondo as Rokuna's boyfriend. More importantly, though, with Mon Colle Knights, I gotta say that it was mostly the main characters that I was particularly obsessed with, rather than most of the monsters or events (although those were the main reasons why I sought DVD copies after Fox Kids stopped airing the show upon becoming FoxBox). That I planned Mondo and Rokuna in particular as the core characters in the old Digimon fic goes miles to show that. If you've read the summaries I wrote on the 11th, about what I once planned for Monster Collection Chronicles' plot, you'll notice I've written very little about any actual monsters.

(On the other hand, I did consider making MCC a reboot of MCK several times before, but found myself more inclined to maintain it as a continuation of the anime instead.)

Finally, let me mention that, even after I first started buying my MCK DVDs back in 2005, while I did enjoy being able to watch the show again, I still could not help but cringe at just how excessively comical most characters' actions and facial expressions tended to get. I'm able to tolerate that sort of thing with other humorous anime, and didn't mind it so much when I was watching the show the first time around, but the more I thought about what would become MCC following its removal from TV, I tended to imagine the characters looking and acting without so too much cartoon physics and artistic exaggeration.

My point with that last paragraph? Like, that's part of the reason why, unlike with the much more reasonable Lucky Star, I can't bring myself to watch the Mon Colle Knights anime anymore, now that my obsession with that fandom is mostly gone. Of course, most episodes of that show were filler anyway, and it's mostly the events of the endgame that would have been relevant to those of Monster Collection Chronicles, putting aside all the monsters themselves that the Knights have befriended up until that point.

But anyway, I think what I've figured out was that, MCC aside, it's mostly been Mondo and Rokuna themselves that I liked about Mon Colle Knights. Part of why I don't think anymore about Cult/MCC these days might very well have to do with their presence in Starbound, which would mean that that fic has become more or less an outlet of sorts for them. And it was only a few months after most of MCC's events were scrapped that I decided to include a modified Rokuna in Starbound to start with. Just her at the time, but still, I can't say that's any kind of coincidence.
dmxrated: (Mai)
Continued from my previous post:

Part III )

Part IV; Jake, you might want to avoid this. )

Parts III and IV, follow up )

(Last time I asked, not too long ago, Chelle said that she was still not up for brainstorming a new outline for Part I, which is what was since replanned as its own fic.)
dmxrated: (Mai)
So, here is what was supposed to have been posted on this day last year, if only my laptop hadn't fucked up on me. This is the exchange I had with Chelle a year earlier still, about the story I once spent years developing a plot for. Here is exactly how it all came apart, leading Starbound to replace it as the focal story of my choice.

Part I )

Part II )

Parts I and II, follow-up )
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So, for a whole week after Blood updated his stories and I reported him for hosting supposedly MA-rated content (just unlocked an entry on the 6th), I genuinely was sick of seeing his username or that story's icon in the archive. A week later, I went onto an ff.net forum designed specifically for rants, to rant about my issues with him. I had to visit his userpage to provide a link to it, and I noticed that he hadn't updated either of his stories since that time.

Yeah. I said I reported him, hoping that someone would take that shit down on him. Since no one seems interested, though, I am still interested enough to see how the antagonists' demises actually play out whenever they do. Before long, I found myself returning to the archive and de-filtering M-rated stories multiple times a day, expecting initially that he'd keep Cries Unheard going. Even given how busy he is with real life, these whole two weeks is the longest he's taken to update anything, with the second and previous being eight days (although said eight was the period during which he first hosted this Azumanga Daioh fic titled No Reason, which he would then update simultaneously with CU). It's dragged out so much that I've taken to just following both him and his story, intending to simply discard any notifications I receive before continuing a given message-check normally.

No, I don't intend to actually read most of Cries Unheard or anything that he writes in the future. I only care about the comeuppance chapters, solely for the sake of closure for the several times I spent less than functional for days on end. If the story gets taken down first, though, then that will be relief of a different flavor, allowing me to pretend that I never even read that shit in the first place.

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Even that aside, I'm already tired of Lucky Star at this point, of writing about the same old characters after writing a total of seven and a half chapters for different fanfics over nearly two years. I want to come back to Cult, and even tried for the second time to just start writing the first main chapter already, but I just can't. Without any future material to work towards, it just seems pointless. I had a lot of fun writing the prologue around Thanksgiving of 2010, but that's because I had the events of four whole fics to look forward to, only the first of which remains (and even then, only with a team each of protagonists and antagonists, not any actual events).

Maybe there's also the fact that my whole point of conceiving Cult in the first place was about the Supporting Knights that Mondo and Rokuna have made friends with during the prologue. Most of the ideas Chelle gave me for the first main chapter had been about all kinds of things, but only a few about any specific Supporters. (And yes, she already told me the other day that, for this first chapter, there isn't much one can do with all ten of them.)

Disinclined as I am, Parasitic Trio seems to be the only option I have left. Honestly, I don't care about Pokemon anymore, and the only reason I have left to write it is to do justice to the hundreds, if not thousands, of hours I spent playing the games.

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Chelle told me not too long ago how important it is to learn how to write without inspiration, but really, I beg to differ. That would be true if I was writing something to profit from, and I don't know why she writes fanfiction (other than that she enjoys it, obviously) but the reason I write fanfiction in the first place, is to have stuff that I'd enjoy re-reading, and that's even more important to me than having an actual audience. A single scene is one thing, but if I have to force myself through a whole chapter, then I'm not likely going to enjoy the fruits of my labor, which more or less defeats the purpose of writing it in the first place.
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Redownloaded Rockman & Forte onto my laptop yesterday. That's the game I was playing when Mom introduced me to Candy Crush Saga, and never got to actually beat when my laptop broke down. Now that I've resolved never to play Candy Crush again for any reason at all, I'd like to celebrate that by playing the game that I ended up playing less than that one.

As far as writing goes, I still have no muse for writing anything further of Starbound's fifth chapter. Most of the original reasons I started writing Cult have been lost, but I do have other reasons to, as follow:

1) That fic was the first major one (barring SMW2: Yoshi's Island rewritten) that I actually got started with, and has gone on quite long enough without an update for over two years already while Starbound and Parasitic Trio got a total of eight chapters written to them (nine if you count Birthday of Destiny).

2) If I'm gonna pull it off, it would be best to do so while Chelle is still around. Considering that Adalia Glenys disappeared without warning after only a year that I had become friends with her, who knows what could happen to Chelle that I might lose touch with her?

3) Having written a two-part prologue to Cult already, I really would hate for a perfectly good concept and setup to go to waste.

4) To keep a balance between Mon Colle Knights, Pokemon, and Lucky Star. I don't want to be left with an empty feeling that would come with leaving one thing behind to spend time with something else if I ever actually do finish Starbound.

In any case, yeah, I have much more of a plan with Starbound (at least during the middle and the end) than I ever did with what was originally going to be part I of Monster Collection Chronicles. For Cult, all I have planned out are some villains to appear and some kind of final battle, compared to some actual plotlines I once had planned out for MCC. But, that's something I'm going to talk about on 9/11 this year, having failed last year.

Really, though, even though Lucky Star interests me a lot more than Mon Colle Knights nowadays, I don't think it would've left that much of an impression on me back when I was those girls' ages myself. No real interest in hair at the time, and I tended to like stuff more for having at least one main character of each gender (which was something MCK had). Might've still enjoyed it for what it was if its anime even existed at the time (the manga started in 2004, and the anime adaptation still came out in Japan only a few years later), and if I had a lot more access to anime beyond a few kids' TV channels (we didn't know about Netflix at the time).
dmxrated: (Tycho)
Two new pics today!

1) Rokuna, Starbound version

http://dmxrated.deviantart.com/art/Rokuna-Starbound-version-362934002

That particular shade of brown sure as hell looks like chocolate, doesn't it! Like a chocolate Easter egg, and only one day after Easter, no less! Though, the flow lines make it look more like actual melted chocolate being poured down a surface of something than like strands of hair having been wrapped in an upward spiral. Probably wouldn't so much if they were more diagonal, but it might be too late to change that now. Will make note of it next time I ask for another pic of her.

In any case, it still made a nice "pinup" of sorts for me to look at while doing the treadmill at the gym, even if it isn't as lustrous when printed up as it is on the screen.

2) Team MCC Weaponized



From left to right:

-Jamison (Voltslicer)
-Anneth (Gale Spear)
-Drake (Metal Impact)
-Elena (Thorn Whip)
-Katsuo (Menacer)
-Rokuna (Acolyte)
-Mondo (Excalibur)
-Kasumi (Eternus)
-Derek (Star Shield)
-Attiya (Serpent Daggers)
-Davis (Diamond Gauntlets)
-Rachael (Arctic Haloes)

Based on this Madoka pic.

In retrospect, I wonder if I should have asked for McKnight to be in the pic as well, facing forward from behind Mondo and Rokuna, armed with a shotgun. Currently, I am planning to commission for a team pic pertaining to Starbound, in which I might (or might not) also request someone that that fic's party will be looking for.

Then again, I do have something on mind for him that will be revealed at the end of Cult, and I wouldn't really want to spoil that.
dmxrated: (Natsuki)
Here is what I've had Chelle working on during the past several months:

http://dmxrated.tumblr.com/post/37128922899/nintendo-power-volume-115-featuring-getter-love

Special thanks also to Kristina Potts, for providing the original image, one of many copied from the website onto her hard drive.

Both parts of the Cult prologue are also on DeviantArt, with minor changes. Like with Mondo & Rokuna's BIG Date, it wouldn't really be worth reading if you've already read the Fanfiction.net version. All you really need to know, are that Mon World is now Rokumon Sekai like it was originally called, Attiya gets two daggers instead of one, the Menacer is T-shaped instead of R-shaped, and Anneth gets an actual spear with some pieces of cloth attached, instead of a flag with a built-in/-on blade.

Part 1
Part 2

With that all said and done, today will be the day that I order the final four volumes of Nintendo Power.
dmxrated: (AVGN)
No, we didn't bother watching the parade this year. Also, Marie and Grandpa are still the only guests we've had for Thanksgiving this year. Uncle Robby and Cousin Adam have returned home from Aruba, but they were likely resting up from traveling.

Mom had me get started with cleaning up under the pine trees. Until I get that all done, I think I'll continue to hold off with the spritesheet and continue playing Angry Birds Rio on the sidelines.

For dinner, we had corned beef instead of turkey. We were talking days ago about how none of us really care much for turkey, although stuffing is one of my favorite courses of Thanksgiving dinner.

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Chelle pointed out a double-standard regarding the weapons that each of the Knights receives in Cult. Namely, that most of the boys receive formal weapons, while the girls receive mostly things that aren't really weapons per se but can be used as such. That, I can say, actually never occurred to me. So, let's take a look at where I drew the ideas for each:

First, the guys:

Excalibur (Mondo/Fire): Swords are the weapon of choice wielded by protagonists in a lot of medieval games such as Chrono Trigger, Dark Cloud, the Grandia series, and of course, the entire Zelda franchise.

Menacer (Katsuo/Demon): Named after a certain light gun for the Sega Genesis. Design is based off of one of Vermillion's guns in Battle Arena Toshinden 4, the gun Shadow holds in the beginning of the opening sequence in Shadow the Hedgehog, and also one of the guns that (I thought) was used in the Columbine shootout. Admittedly, though, I have found myself torn between whether to keep the R-shape or make it T-shaped.

Diamond Gauntlets (Davis/Earth): The element Earth is associated with strength, which in turn is associated with the arms.

Voltslicer (Jamison/Storm): Chainsaw. Battery-powered. Fucking bad-ass!

Metal Impact (Drake/Metal): Originated way back as a regular sledgehammer. Jake proposed some kind of club called the Metal Blade, but that name would also cover the various swords that Mondo and other then-Knights (back when the number of them was 24) were going to use. Original inspiration before that was from the Man of Steel, from when I played Death & Return of Superman, but afterwards, was based on certain hammers that Goro and Maximillian wield in Dark Cloud 1 and 2 respectively.

Star Shield (Derek/Space): Design partially based on the Rokumon, Rokumon Sekai's holy symbol. This is a defensive weapon instead of an offensive one, because this "element" (or rather, non-elemental psionics) is about fighting with one's mind.

Now for the girls:

Acolyte (Rokuna/Holy): Based on the kinds of staves that Alfina, a holy person known as a Communicator, wields in Grandia III. There is even one in that game called the Acolyte's Staff, hence the name.

Eternus (Kasumi/Time): A pocket watch, based on one of five core secondary weapons throughout the Castlevania series.

Thorn Whip (Elena/Life): Based on the basic Grass-type move Vine Whip, from Pokemon.

Arctic Haloes (Rachael/Frost): Not a whole lot to do with the actual element. This kind of weapon was chosen based on that which Mint and Tio wield in Threads of Fate and Grandia II respectively. Just thought it looked interesting, is all.

Scale Dagger (Attiya/Water): Design based on the Serpent Sword from Dark Cloud, except blue instead of red. In that game, you need that particular weapon to kill a giant snake, although the snake in question is actually in a forest instead of anywhere aquatic.

Gale Flag (Anneth/Wind): Flags blow in the wind, and in this case, the cloth part would have been creating wind itself when she swings the weapon in an arc. Jake just did suggest something based off of the Sunlight Heart from Buso Renkin, and also given how the cloth part would be easily torn up, as Chelle pointed out, I find it rather hard to argue that my own idea is still better.

(Even with everything after part I done away with, there's still one more, but we'll keep that a secret until the end of the one fic.)
dmxrated: (Ultimate Girls)
Been meaning to write a post containing the email exchanges I've had with Chelle weeks ago regarding Monster Collection Chronicles. Even though everything after part I is no longer due to happen, and even though my writing skills aren't really gonna improve due to my lack of appreciation for the art of writing (let's remember that I care mostly about the storybuilding aspect), the basis of What Could Have Been is still reason enough to write individual scenes like I've written twice before.

The following scene would take place during part III. For clarification, Mondo, Rokuna, Katsuo, Davis, Drake, Anneth, and Hitomi are in the middle of a snowfield, walking as giants (except for Hitomi, who can't use Growth on her own) towards a cavern at least several hundred yards away from them. Even though they could have just teleported, they chose instead to walk just to relax and enjoy the scenery, and also to be prepared in case more enemies were to appear. The other half of the Knight team is taking care of matters elsewhere.

Read more... )

If you'd like to know, I also toyed with the idea of whatever Anneth did during the aforementioned battle being the reason why Mondo would get brain-raped by a shoggoth, resulting in his senses becoming dysfunctional, and said battle having taken place at least days prior to this scene. Would have given him a good reason to still be mad at her for that long, plus it would involve his eyes looking kinda like this, something which would make for a nice contrast to the much more (and excessively) comical cartoon physics that plagued the anime, for as long as he perceives the world as grotesque (or whenever he does after temporarily recovering for the first time). Decided against it, though, because one, the shoggoth storyline was already reserved for part IV (although I would like to salvage it to use late in Cult), two, that would mean that he'd be unfit to even go on missions (and Rokuna would have to sit out as well in order to take care of him), three, he wouldn't have been able to socialize with his friends as well as he did, being unable to even function properly as a person, and four, to give Anneth as much to atone for as Jamison will have regarding Kevin would mean that she probably would have kept silent in shame anyway.
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Went with Mom and Marie to New Jersey yesterday to drop Grandpa Bob off.

Just shortly before we got there, we stopped at Dunkin' Donuts, where Grandpa gave Marie a ten to spend on half a dozen donuts and a sandwich. Me and Marie each got three different donuts, and I also got tuna salad in a croissant, which was the most appetizing thing on the sandwich menu. It kinda sucked, and to be honest, I think that I might be losing my taste for tuna, although that's probably the only thing besides fish and chips that's gonna stave off Alzheimer's, since I very much hate most kinds of cooked fish. Had my vanilla kreme donut after consuming that thing, and saved the other two for later.

Turns out that all the kitchen cupboards have been removed, with all their contents on the dining room table for now. I also saw that most of Cousin Adam's toys and kid-books in the porch aren't there anymore, though I did notice two airsoft guns (a handgun and a sniper rifle, with a clip right near the former) among other things now occupying the room.

So anyway, I helped the others unpack our car and Grandpa's, and as a bonus, Grandpa let me keep a box of Sprite which he says he didn't even know was in his trunk in the first place. Afterwards, I had a nap while Mom and Grandpa went to the post office, and then Mom woke me up to get ready to return home upon coming back.

Stopped at a McDonald's shortly after leaving the house, where Marie got a double cheeseburger and I got a hot-n-spicy chicken burger and a Rolo McFlurry. Shortly before we got there, though, Marie told us that she actually never even heard of a McFlurry. While we have been to McDonald's when we were kids, such was only once in a while, and we only ever got burgers, fries, and soda, so Marie told us that one time when she was in grade school, the busdriver asked everyone if they knew what a McFlurry is, and Marie thought they said "flurry" and told them it's a miniature snowstorm, and everyone laughed.

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Got home at 5:15. Had a nap, and then chatted with Jake for a bit, before we all had dinner. I loaded or washed whatever I could take from the table after I finished eating, and then had my double chocolate donut with a glass of milk. (Still got a Boston Cream donut left.)

Played Pokemon Diamond for a bit, and then went outside. Dad was still in the garage, and I told him that I've noticed that the dirt I recently poured is covered in pebbles, which I assumed I would have to rake off at some point. He and I went over to look at it, and he told me that he'd sprinkle some grass seed on it while it settles down over the summer.

Just then, Brian's old friend James greeted us while riding his bike on Long Island Avenue. Dad and I told him about stuff that was going on, including where Brian's going to school and some kind of job that he recently landed. Dad did most of the talking with him, but I told him about several things that include fictional counterparts to myself and a bunch of other kids I once knew, him included. Namely, my Mon Colle Knights fanfic, titled Cult, and an ensemble pic that Chelle once drew of the entire main team.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7199321/1/Cult (The fanfic)

http://yiuokami.deviantart.com/art/Team-MCChronicles-201353381 (The pic)

So, he, I, and Marie looked at the pic together, and talked about their real-life counterparts:

This is an lj-cut. Click to read more details. In this case, stuff that either was mentioned along the way or I feel is worth mentioning now. )

Finally, I should note that even though Kevin (Steven in real life) has Davis's place in the prologue, something will happen to him between the prologue and the main story which either kills him or causes him to drop out (won't be specified which). This actually will pertain to the plot due to take place.

(I did tell James shortly before he left to register an account for both DeviantArt and Fanfiction.net, so that he can favorite both works. However, I don't know when I'll actually update the fanfic, given that I'm currently more interested in writing Parasitic Trio (my Pokemon ficseries) and teaching myself kanji, but when I do, he'll receive an email if he adds it to his Story Alert.)
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Brian brought my laptop to Apple to get looked at. From what he told us, the person diagnosing it told him that only the display is broken, but it would cost $280 to repair that. We decided it wasn't worth it, because he currently has two laptops, one of which he bought to work on, and the other one he kept because it still works, and we instead negotiated to have Mom buy Brian's first one for me to use from now on.

(During dinner, he told us that the person there hooked it up to a PC to get the contents to show, and soon as my current wallpaper was visible, he was like "Oh, Lucky Star!" after Brian told him it was my Mac.)

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From now on, what I've been referring to as Monster Collection Chronicles this whole time is just Cult. I've already shown Chelle the summaries for each fic, and we've concluded that while part I already has a solid frame and part III could also work, parts II and IV are just broken beyond salvation.

As a whole, all four fics would have been interesting to write, what with their own kinds of enemies for the Knights to fight, as well as with the non-combat-related stuff in each part. However, I am against bending logic or character just because the plot demands it. In the past, I did consider the plot of part II to have fit nicely together as it did, which is why I continued to hold onto it, but at some point, I realized that logically, it just wouldn't work.

While Chelle did say that part III would work in its own right, its main purpose was to show the dystopian future that roots all the way down to Osama bin Laden, the one who founded Al Qaida and, fictionally, Nickelodeon. It was also going to be the events that lead Kasumi to use the Time Sword to alter history, so that bin Laden and Takeshi Okimichi wouldn't be such a huge deal, and so that Pfizgiy could be reincarnated while the Knights were still alive to take care of her.

Until now, half the point of the ficseries was going to be that existence or non-existence of Nickelodeon would be the one core factor to decide how much of a future the worlds would have. However, the other half of it was the twelve-member fighting force, which would have specifically included core MCK characters Mondo Ohya and Rokuna Hiragi. So, given everything else I'd like to do in life, I think I'll just focus on the one fic and let the story rest after it's finished.

I should also mention that, since the main part of part II was going to take place when the Knights are around 17 years of age, I'm wondering whether or not to extend the period of time between the prologue and the main part of part I. On the one hand, it would make it much more believable that the Knights would be skilled enough with their respective weapons to use them in active combat. On the other hand, there is also this pic, which still depicts them as kids, and would barely stay relevant if they were already teens when the main story begins (especially since Davis wasn't among them during the prologue). Not to mention that two of Anneth's most important moe features (those being her braces and her ribbon) wouldn't look as appropriate on her when she's fifteen as when she's eleven.
dmxrated: (AVGN)
First off, let me start by saying that I still am reading TV Tropes & Idioms, and I did say the other day "If my mood [at the time] is anything to go by". I'm just not coming back to Dethroning Moment of Suck or anything in its family, because even if that stupid rule is done away with, it would be up to whoever cares at that point to restore the bold and italics wherever it was previously (and I'm certainly not gonna be the one to do it with anything Nickelodeon-related). According to a thread in the discussion board (in which I participated as both McKnight and DMXrated), someone said that people (especially the administrators) question why it exists in the first place, and have even considered eliminating the whole trope (which they might as well, if you ask me). That's as much as I'm gonna bother to say about it for now (if ever).

Anyway, now for the real topic of this entry:

In most video games, characters (both protagonist and enemies alike) can survive harmful stuff for a set number of times, depending on certain variables. RPGs are especially notable for this: There are different values (for both Player Characters and enemies alike) that determine how many times someone can take any given attack. HP determines how close you are to dying (until which you're in perfect shape to continue fighting), Attack power, for both characters themselves and equipment and magic, determine how severe an HP loss your target will sustain, Defensive power determines how powerful an attack you can take, and Experience is what makes you more powerful and can only be obtained by defeating enemies. You also need experience in order to learn more powerful spells (which make older ones obsolete), and you also need Money (which is also obtained primarily by killing things) to buy stronger weapons, better armor, and better items, all with which to raise your stats and to support yourself in battles to come. Weaker enemies yield less experience and money than stronger ones. And all of this is designed to keep the game challenging, to provide you an incentive to fight enemies at your own level and to spend time and effort fighting them, instead of running away all the time lest you come to a boss fight underprepared (and no game will ever allow you to run from bosses).

In most non-video game works (save for a few works such as Pokemon, Digimon, Dragon Ball Z, and Power Rangers), as well as in real life, people or other beings involved in battle cannot withstand much more than one hit (if even that) from anything, be it a sword, a fireball, or a nuclear bomb. Different types of swords, knives, clubs, guns, or whatever other type of weapon you can think of, are no more or less deadly than one another. Even though differently designed swords have different physical advantages or disadvantages, giving them magical properties (such as a coat of fire on the blade) just to make them more powerful would just be redundant, as would knocking someone into the air and then shooting or jumping to get more hits in (since they'd probably die upon landing anyway).

Now, usually, when I'm watching something, I tend just to go along with whatever goes on in the show. However, when I'm reading TV Tropes, there are plenty of tropes for which I look directly for aversions. Sometimes, this may be because there supposedly isn't room for them, or otherwise because they only serve to enhance the drama despite defying logic, or because they're just ridiculous in and of themselves. A few examples pertaining to the previous two paragraphs include Almost Lethal Weapons, Inverse Law of Sharpness and Accuracy (which might as well be Corresponding Survivability and Accuracy), and Conservation of Ninjutsu. The first of those is not Truth in Television at all (and therefore, off my table); the second is an artificial formula which exists solely for the sake of drama (except for anything made for kids, in which it's also meant to tone down violence); and for the third and anything along its lines, there had better be some real justification for it (which there isn't in Commando, which I commented on a month ago).

To be fair, I can accept bullets, arrows, laser beams, or anything else that's either shot or thrown to constantly miss the targets. Guns are not homing weapons, but of course, with A-Team Firing in place, the protagonists can't have better accuracy for no in-universe reason just because they're the ones you're rooting for.

In short, if something doesn't make sense on its own, and there's nothing to back it up with, it shouldn't happen just because the plot or the Rule of Drama demands it.

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So, what leads up to all this? Well, more than a month ago, Chelle and I were talking about Monster Collection Chronicles, and how I could enable the Knights to fight against hordes of minions and enable the major antagonists (particularly in part I) to be able to withstand a lot more than any of their mooks could. My first idea was with rings (yes, taken directly from the Sonic franchise), but Chelle shot that idea down by saying that there wouldn't be room in the Rokumonverse for such a phenomenon, and suggested that I simply make an effort to create balanced battles.

She had also gone to explain why having the Knights be able to resurrect one another from death wouldn't work, both logically and for the sake of drama. If Gasejo could grant special powers to McKnight to in turn grant to twelve children, then why didn't she grant any such powers to the elemental angels or anyone else within Mon World, instead of some random guy in Man World? Furthermore, if it was possible to bring the dead back to life in Mon World (which, according to me, would only be possible for 24 hours post-mortem), then someone should have been able to resurrect Lark during the war in which he died, and he'd be able to deal with Reda long before he's able to do any real damage to their universe, thus negating everything that happens during the Mon Colle Knights anime. And, if the Knights were able to help one another like that, then they'd be pretty much infallible no matter how genuinely competent their enemies are.

For the sake of logic, there is little I can do to salvage such an idea. The only reason it's possible in RPGs, is because if each member in the party were to be Killed Off For Real once their HP reaches 0, the game itself would end for real, and you'd have to start all over, plus any parts of the plot that require said characters to be alive would get fucked up the ass.

So, the Knights aren't entirely infallible, and if it is possible to revive someone from something deadly, it would likely be for only as long as the brain is still alive. However, that pretty much means that the heroes (and any major villains involved) better learn to actively dodge or withstand everything. In order for that to happen, they would have to become artificially superpowered (able to boost speed, strength, endurance, and to heal wounds, at the very least). There will be no artificial equations. That also means that the generals better have their own way of getting by and standing a fighting chance against the Knights.

Yeah. Chelle ruled that out one time before, but if I recall correctly, her main argument was if I intended to show the Knights do any training with their new weapons, in which case, I'd be stretching everyone's willing suspension of disbelief who's reading it.

In any case, between the ability to resurrect and Instant Kick-Ass, one thing has to stay. For the aforementioned story-related reasons, it's probably not gonna be the former, but they can't both go because the most important point of the ficseries (besides demonizing Nickelodeon, in part II) is to showcase fighting (especially without summoning monsters, although they will still do that on the sidelines).
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First, for those of you who haven't read the original list, here's a link:

http://dmxrated.livejournal.com/365960.html

Now for some changes that have been made:

-The Krippler Brothers are now the Molebear Brothers, at Jake's suggestion from the Mana game franchise.

-Ching Long is now Dao Ling.

-Alpha now fulfills the Storm element.

-8-bit is no longer part of the team, but will have his own role in spoiler )

-Replacing 8-bit is now:

Team Iron, a five-member sentai team of actual medieval knights (both male and female). All still unnamed at the moment, though Chelle did suggest I use some names from medieval Europe. Created based on the word "knight" used to refer to the protagonists, and also because Chelle referred to the hero team as a "sentai team" several times in her blog before. (Chose the team name because I wanted something that doesn't require "the" to precede it, but don't know at the moment what else I could call it.)

-And the head honcho would have been the Grim Reaper, but Chelle kinda argued that one down and why he'd serve Warp alone, given that death is a neutral force that applies to all creatures, and that he is just the personification of the concept.

(In response to this entry, Jake will probably use most Castlevania games as an analogy, where Death directly does serve Count Dracula and is fought as the second-to-last boss. Of course, that probably won't hold up, since that's a completely different franchise altogether. I myself find it interesting enough to note, though.)

Chelle did suggest that I use someone like Eurynomos or Samael if I wanted someone death-themed, since they don't personify death itself. However, a little while ago, I did propose someone similar to La Ilim from Grandia III (not a direct clone, though), since I happen to like his voice and some things he says in battle (the latter which she actually found narmy when I named examples). The leader in question could just as easily have been some kind of lich or something, but since that particular character carries a green crystal skull, that may have had something to do with my current choice (since Death often is portrayed as skeletal).

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So anyway, let's briefly analyze each of the villains (including 8-bit), according to four different groupings:

Read more... )

That all said and done, Chelle has mentioned before that Camille, The Nameless One, and 8-bit would be rather out-of-place for Rokumon-verse. I have kept that on mind since, and it became easy enough to replace 8-bit after having thought of a third, dual-gendered team to complement the Molebear Bros. and the Beehive Brigade. With the other two and Death, though, I think I've become somewhat attached with this little ensemble and the way I grouped them I've described in the above cut that it hasn't been so easy to let go of, even though I did say before that I am open to different suggestions. (Not an outright no, but it might help if I understood why I'm still somewhat inclined to retain them.)

So far, I have already agreed not to place any humorous scenes or dialogue too close to anything much more serious. The Nameless One still remains untouched to this day, but I did consider modifying Camille. Given some things that Chelle suggested, it's possible that she'll be a dark version of Kahimi, rather than a stereotypical old hag w/ hat and broomstick and all.
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Chelle was nice enough to refund me all my points two days ago. I didn't even ask for them back. Apparently, she must've decided on her own after reading my previous entry.

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Had a bit of a comment exchange with scarlet-pikachu, who made a list of people who blocked him and why each of them did so. One of those even includes someone whom he had never even met beforehand, and a few others had un-blocked him at some point. Nice to meet someone else who's been blocked for unfair reasons (in this case, by multiple fellow members).

http://scarlet-pikachu.deviantart.com/journal/People-Who-Have-Blocked-Me-Lawl-243777206 (My thread begins five comment-pages in, in case anyone's curious.)

So, do I have a lesson to learn by losing nanashi-no? Sure I do. Be completely insecure about requesting stuff to be added in or changed in something that I'm paying for. Honestly, people make mistakes, and that was just really immature and underhanded of her to cut off all communication from me and have me find out on my own a week later. It's not like I spammed her with gibberish or sexual innuendos or told her for no good reason to go fuck herself.

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Part II of the MCC prologue has been uploaded onto Fanfiction.net, after someone left a comment on my dA page about the team pic that Chelle drew. Originally, I was gonna wait for Jake to ghostwrite the entire prologue for me, and was planning to bring it up with him again after I complete Mother 3. However, the aforementioned comment was enough of a cue to warrant mentioning it, and as it turns out, he has been unable to get around to it. So, I've decided to just post the chapter and give him until after the holidays before bringing it up next time.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7199321/2/Cult
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Today is the day that Mon Colle Knights first started airing in the United States ten years ago. I will admit that I didn't start watching the anime until mid-series, and given that I wasn't keeping track of time back then, I will never know exactly when I decided to start watching it after having ditched Pokemon. However, we gotta celebrate this date somehow, and what better way than to have started posting the first half of the prologue for Monster Collection Chronicles.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7199321/1/Cult

Yeah, the first fic is called Cult for now, and I did leave "Monster Collection Chronicles" out of the title. Also glad that Chelle suggested not too long ago that I split the prologue in half, given its length. I still haven't finished it yet, and I didn't think it would be a good idea to rush the end just to get it in on time for today.

Today, I'm probably gonna finish recording the anime onto my hard drive, and then load the whole series onto YouTube. Other than that, maybe watch some episodes of the anime on my TV set.
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Heard from Jake yesterday morning that Osama bin Laden is dead. Even though President Obama had announced it only several days ago, if this is anything to go by, more than a few sources say that he actually died only three months after the attacks.

Just recently, Jake had asked me what made me decide to use him of all people as the main villain of Monster Collection Chronicles part II. The answer is that something I read on a site called Newgrounds less than a year later started with the words "America is angry!"

In any case, as far as MCC goes, he was already set to be fought and killed on September 11, 2004, 9:11 P.M. Hey, there's room for altering history, isn't there?

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Had to pay for a new 30-day trial for ReadJapaneseFast. I think I lost the link to it when our computer had to be restarted a few months ago, but now I have it again in my Favorites tab.

Mom got a harness for Mabel when she came home, for when we go somewhere to celebrate Brian's upcoming graduation. Mabel was not the least bit thrilled about having to wear it, and wouldn't move when we tried to walk her for the first time.

As far as Pokemon goes, I finally obtained a Happiny Doll in Pearl. In Diamond, all I've been doing for the past several days was watering a few berries I've planted on Route 208 every now and then, (besides checking certain Goods Traders to see if they have an Alert Trap 4 each morning). As a result, I've gotten 15 Belue and Durin Berries each, the biggest number of berries I had ever gotten from a single plant.
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Okay, so I still have yet to discuss actual storylines I have in mind about part 1 of MCC with Chelle. For now, though, I'd like to get this off my chest after having thought about it for so many months. But anyway, this is gonna be a lengthy post. Here are twelve villains who (for the record) will work towards setting the demon god Warp free from his prison before working together with him to wage war on Mon World as retribution for his imprisonment from eons ago (along with Chelle's responses and their sources of inspiration).

Before I get started, only the first eight listed on this post were ever mentioned to Chelle (almost a year ago), and she did tell me that a few of them would be hard to take seriously. Three of them came to mind later, and the last one is just the one who brought them all together. None of them had names when I first introduced them to her, and these descriptions will be more up-to-date.

While I still haven't replaced any of the first eight I came up with, what I'm really looking for is twelve characters with distinct, unique personalities, along with something they all have in common. The fact that some of them would come across as somewhat comical by their gimmicks (others are still more serious) makes things that much more interesting, when combined with the fact that all of them are just as harmful as Reda are genuinely dangerous (as opposed to Count Collection, who normally inflicts and/or receives slapstick injuries). I am open to suggestions if anyone has any.

Spoilers will be mentioned in comments if need be, but to name a few examples of what I mean, there's Digimon Adventure 01, which had Etemon, Puppetmon, and (at least the dub version of) Piedmon, along with a few more typical villains (such as Devimon and Myotismon). Each of Magus523's Mega Man game novelizations, with their own set of Robot Masters, would also count.

And then, there's Shin Megami Tensei: Persona 4, in which the bosses in question are representations of the characters repressed negative thoughts. (Some of the following videos are combined with the preceeding cutscenes.)

Shadow Yosuke
Shadow Chie
Shadow Yukiko
Shadow Kanji (Warning: Yaoibait)
Shadow Rise (Warning: Fanservice)
Shadow Teddie
Shadow Mitsuo (inspired one of my own boss characters)
Shadow Naoto

Anyway, without further ado:

Cut for sheer length and fanfic spoilers! )
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Chelle has drawn me a pic of all twelve Knights in Monster Collection Chronicles:

Main team once planned for Monster Collection Chronicles

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Had an appointment each with Dr. Perret and Dr. Mattimoe. Hardly had anything to discuss with the former. With the latter, I was supposed to get a PPD, but Mom got carried away with discussing several other things with him, and we forgot to get it.

Mom then spent a few minutes shopping at Macy's, before going to Costco. Given what time it was, she thought I might be able to grab a slice of pizza there while she picked up groceries. As it turns out, the clerks at the counter only accept cash, which I didn't have. Well, at least I saved myself a few bucks there.

Wasn't until around 2 that we finally got home. Mom commented that she didn't think any store would be so crowded on a weekday, when most people are at work. She made grilled cheeses for me and herself when we got home.

She later went out to pick up Brian. When they got home, Brian offered to help me with Pokemon Ranger: Guardian Signs, but I told him that there were several more urgent things I needed him to take care of as long as he's still here.

First of those two was Chip-chan Kick. Somehow, he managed to save the .bin file onto my flash drive, though he did comment that my wallpaper was embarrassing. I still have yet to try it out on either Mednafen or Xe.

The other thing was the main computer's choppiness. So far, possibly among other things, he has tried cleaning the hard drive with the air hose in the garage, before going to bed. It's much faster now, but trying to play anything on any emulator still sucks.

At this point, I think I'll play most ROMs on my laptop. As a bonus, that also means I won't have to pause the game every now and then to let Dad on the main computer. That said, I might even delete most ROMs and emulators that I have on our PC, so as to free it up even more. As long as Brian is here, though, I suppose I might as well see if he'd be able to fix it up even more.

Yeah, even though Xe is only compatible with Windows and Linux, it pretty much seems like its programmer has stopped working on it entirely anyway, which would mean that it won't likely ever be able to play Nintendo 64 games. But, even if it gets completed, it's still doubtful that a translation patch for Getter Love!! will ever materialize. If it does, then I'm probably gonna have to find a way to burn a modded ROM copy onto a cartridge.
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Re-uploaded Rokuna's pic, but it's in storage for the time being until further notice.

Successfully obtained the Azure Flute and the Member Card with my Action Replay DS-i. Here's what I found out I was doing wrong: Unlike in the Gen III games, you're actually supposed to obtain the items in question from a deliveryman, just like when you download something legitimately. Might be for the better, though, seeing that the Eon Ticket I created in Ruby replaced the Wailmer Pail.

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Been reading MAD's 20 Dumbest People, Events, and Things of 2010 for the past few days. While Mom drove me and Brian to an eye appointment yesterday afternoon, I brought up that issue with building a mosque on ground zero, which MAD made a parody of If You Give a Mouse a Cookie about. To sum it up, if such a thing were to happen, it would unleash a storm of protests and controversy that no one would be able to stop.

Mom asked me if I read or watch the news, because it's been news for over a year now. I don't, because it hardly pertains to my daily life. Nevermind the fact that we stopped receiving the paper ages ago, though even when we did, I usually just read the comics and rarely any actual articles. I have been aware of the BP oil spill, though, which was also included in the lineup. However, most news I get comes from when I decide to sit down in the living room while Dad just so happens to be watching News12 in the morning.

This reminds me of a discussion I had with Chelle half a year before 2010. She warned me (and Jake did as well several years beforehand) that if I were to have the Nickelodeon Base right where the World Trade Center used to be in part II of Monster Collection Chronicles, it could be grounds for my web server to remove my site. Even though it would have been in character for Osama bin Laden to mock America like that, I later decided for it to be somewhere on the water, and settled for stating what could have "bin".

Just recently, I got the idea of the base, rather than having grown gradually and being concealed with an invisibility spell, to rise quickly out of the ground while the city is still populated, causing thousands of people to panic as roots and hellspawn spread out. Not sure if that will be the case, though, and even then, it will still probably remain off of Ground Zero, in-universe for other (probably strategical) reasons, but bin Laden himself might state that if it was practical enough, he would have preferred to go for insulting the USA with the former WTC location.
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Hooked the VCR up to the hard drive yesterday, and it turns out that everything on my second new tape is just downright fucked up. Didn't bother recording anything to the hard drive, so I decided to send an email to Tomodachi (the group that fansubbed the Makendou OAV) to just translate what I already have up on YouTube.

(I did try out a DVD while I had the unit hooked up. The quality was much smoother than even my original tape, so that means nothing's wrong with EZ Grabber, just with the tape.)

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After just reading recently that Melissa will likely be moving away sometime next year, I've decided that I'm going to start a new game in Pokemon Diamond today. Read more... )

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Even though I just started a new game with Zone of the Enders: The Fist of Mars (and only got past two scenes so far), I've decided that playing it any further would be a moot point. The only reason I started in the first place was to write down stats, since everyone's HP starts out to the exact hundred in that game. Had something to do with Monster Collection Chronicles, and the grid-based gameplay was also something inspiring.

As of yesterday, though, I've decided that the only "stats" for MCC that I care about anymore would be MP and SP, which would determine how long each Knight would be able to use their magical powers at any given time. HP, attack power, defense power, and all that other stuff is no longer relevant; injuries would be realistic, especially since a major point of MCC was to deviate from certain mechanics of video games.

For the record, I still do plan on mapping each area for MCC. I think this has to do with the ficseries' inspiration from video games, but to actually have everything plotted out instead of just making stuff up... Well, don't quite know how to explain it, but I do know two stories for which the authors created maps to go with their works: Eragon, (even though the story itself is nothing but crap), and Egregious Exile (a Sonic fanfic; links at the ends of certain chapters). The authors of those two stories must have had similar reasons for having drawn maps for their stories in the first place, and I would presume it had to do with some kind of fulfillment.

Don't worry. Actual battles will not be governed by dice. Everyone is still free to act as they see fit, and anything consisting of minuscule movements (such as close-range combat) will just be made up as I go along.

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